Tuesday, May 11, 2010

A few ramblings and Teaser Tuesday!

Ok, so, first of all...I have to say a big

THANK YOU~

to everyone for their sweet and thoughtful comments on Mother's Day.  What a great bunch of bloggy friends I have!  I believe my taste is impeccable and your hearts are golden.  I was moved by them.  And honestly, I love each and every comment.  They are like candy in my in-box that I can't wait to open.  Things have been insanely busy lately and I haven't had as much time as I'd like to be blogging and keeping up, so your comments mean that much more.

BUT, on to more important things.  It's Teaser Tuesday and I may be late today, but I'm still here to post my own. 

Here's another excerpt from my latest WIP,  Sybil.  This one is from Chapter 7.  All feedback welcome!

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Muaw Ha Ha (my attempt at an evil laugh)...let's face it, Teaser Tuesday, is a bit evil, isn't it???

Hope your week is off to a great start!
*hugs*
kristi

13 comments:

  1. I like it. Authentic voice for the age and I can relate to feeling like that in Science class. Good teaser!

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  2. Love the scene, AND the evil laugh!

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  3. Brilliant!!! You have such a strong voice that I can't help but enjoy every little tidbit you share!

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  4. When I read this scene, I was on the edge of my seat. You are great with tension :)

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  5. Great teaser... got me wanting more, and thats hard to do.

    keep it up and best of luck.

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  6. Love the scene! I'm totally hooked!

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  7. I like it! You've captured a chem class so well; brought back (unfortunate) memories! Thanks for sharing.

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  8. Great teaser :) And the evil laugh was very well done.

    Jen

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  9. No fair! *tear tear* I love it. Why do all great things have to end???

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  10. I love "my favorite lips" ohhh I remember that possessive kinda obsession! Well done!

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